Every one has some thing

[داليا]

Every one has some thing to live with


Every one has some hopes to think of


Every one live with some promises that they will never be truth


They live with lies


They live with tears


They live with them self


They live alone


They never care about the people around them


Because the are…Afraid


They are afraid form telling what they feel


They are afraid from saying the truth


, from knowing the truth


They are afraid from every thing


They simply don't trust them self


Dalia

[lebanon19xx]

Nice words Dalia

keep posting Nice post like this one,ok??

see you later D

your friend >>>>>

lebanon19xx

[KoloNeL]

thank U Dalia very much

and be hopeful

[pesho]

Every one has some hopes to think of




That's right
Thanks a lot
:eh_s(15)::eh_s(15):

[heba-t]

They are afraid from saying the truth


, from knowing the truth





Dalia
Maybe the truth is rare nowadays ,but I hope to find it :)and I never afraid of it even it hurts sometimes
Thank you >>it's very nice:eh_s(15):

[داليا]

I wanna say Thank u to every 1 read and like what i write
ur friend dalia

[محمد سامر سروجي]

First of all i would like to thank you and encourage you to write more and more.

Most of the great minds in the world are writers.

I found some errors in your English writings, I would like to point them out so that you can enhance your English more and more



Every one (Everyone) has some thing something to live with


Every one (Everyone) has some hopes to think of


Every one (Everyone) live (lives) with some promises that they will never be truth true (or that will never become a reality) l



They live with lies


They live with tears


They live with them self (themself) l



They live alone


They never care about the people around them


Because the are…Afraid


They are afraid form telling (showing)* what they feel


They are afraid from saying (telling)* the truth

, from knowing the truth


They are afraid from every thing (everything) l



They simply don't trust them self (themself) l


Dalia

* here there is no problem to keep it as it was, but usually you say show your feeling or express yor feeling, and tell the truth

[محمد طاهر أسد]

Great words Thanks for you

[LORD ALaa]

This is very cool some people they just need Self-confidence
thank U

[hopeless]

If you are trying to spread some hope I think you have managed a little
But ..............
There is a lot to treat................!